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Some people told me I shouldn't try
Because all you do is make me cry
But I love you to much to let you go
I love you more then you think you know
You tell me that you just don't care
All those times I needed you there
to hold me when i hurt real bad
to dry my tears, and take my sad
you can't understand how i feel inside
when it was over, I just died
All I want is for you to see
is what you really mean to me
Ever since that horrible day
that i heard those words you had to say
I can't stop thinking about you
I want you to know all this is true
Everything you've read
is about the things you've said
I'll never, ever stop tryin'
But I am so sick of Cryin'
©2005-2009 ~KinkyDevil
:iconkinkydevil:

Author's Comments

A poem about a girl who is sick of crying over this guy but still wnats him (poem has nothing to do with me, I get inspired and write about my mates)

Comments


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:icondevilskitten:
Wow. This is a great poem, with a lot of emotion. Great work. I know how you feel with that. And I really love your picture its very unique and pretty. Great colour. But again your poem is very good.
:icondevilskitten:
Wow. This is a great poem, with a lot of emotion. Great work. And I really love your picture its very unique and pretty. Great colour. But again your poem is very good.
:iconxyionan:
wow great poem its very emotional i like it ^_^

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:ahoy:
comission meee! you know you want to!
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:iconkinkydevil:
thanks for the comment of the picture....but unfortunatly i didnt draw it :(

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Baby is this love for real?:liquify:
:liquify: Take me in your arms to feel
The beating of your heart baby :liquify:
:liquify: The beating of your heart baby!


:flirty: Kinky Devil :flirty:
:iconsavetheduck:
"all i want is for you to see
is what you really mean to me" <--- don't have the is at the beginning of the first line... it doesnt need to be there and it throws off the second line.

i like it though... i do the same thing.. write for other people... i'll need to put up more of my poetry soon

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savETheduck
:tux: :flagus: :penguin:
i <3 my sailor! - *please come home soon*
:iconquenquen:
Gorgeous, and so sad... this poem seriously relates to my own life. Continue writing poems, espeically ones like this.. you have a devine talent.

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:pee::toilet:
:iconangelgrrrrrrrl:
u poor thing! who's it based on? :floating:

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return:rose:
:iconkinkydevil:
its not about me...its about my mate!

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Baby is this love for real?:liquify:
:liquify: Take me in your arms to feel
The beating of your heart baby :liquify:
:liquify: The beating of your heart baby!


:flirty: Kinky Devil :flirty:
:iconangelgrrrrrrrl:
oops, my bad! :floating:

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return:rose:

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