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Some people told me I shouldn't try
Because all you do is make me cry
But I love you to much to let you go
I love you more then you think you know
You tell me that you just don't care
All those times I needed you there
to hold me when i hurt real bad
to dry my tears, and take my sad
you can't understand how i feel inside
when it was over, I just died
All I want is for you to see
is what you really mean to me
Ever since that horrible day
that i heard those words you had to say
I can't stop thinking about you
I want you to know all this is true
Everything you've read
is about the things you've said
I'll never, ever stop tryin'
But I am so sick of Cryin'
A poem about a girl who is sick of crying over this guy but still wnats him (poem has nothing to do with me, I get inspired and write about my mates)
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syckandtwysted Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy hells...somebody else who understands...
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RoguetheScarredAngel Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Writer
This is good
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PartyNightLight Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It made me feel so sad!!! D: now i'm depressed!!!!
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IsisBunny Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i feel that way about 2 of my ex's but..........theres no changing the past
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sakuraharuno123346 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is almost the same as me...
I'm in love with someone that doesn't love me back so I cry...
But he doesn't know how much I love him and that also hurts...

It's beautiful :')
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boyburke13 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it
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seaturtle1023 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
it makes me sad just looking at it NOT in the bad way. it's realy good
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miku4132 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
omg this made me cry
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knightswhodontsayni Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Some things in life are bad
They can really make you mad
Other things just make you swear and curse
When you're chewing on life's gristle
Don't grumble, give a whistle
And this'll help things turn out for the best
And...

Always look on the bright side of life (whistle)
Always look on the light side of life (whistle)
If life seems jolly rotten
There's something you've forgotten
And that's to laugh and smile and dance and sing

When you're feeling in the dumps
Don't be silly chumps
Just purse your lips and whistle - that's the thing
And...

Always look on the bright side of life... (whistle)
Come on!
Always look on the bright side of life... (whistle)

For life is quite absurd
And death's the final word
You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow

So always look on the bright side of death (whistle)
Just before you draw your terminal breath (whistle)
Life's a piece of shit
When you look at it

Life's a laugh and death's a joke, it's true
You'll see it's all a show
Keep 'em laughing as you go
Just remember that the last laugh is on you

And always look on the bright side of life
Always look on the right side of life (whistle)
Always look on the bright side of life (whistle)
Always look on the bright side of life (whistle)
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Zoeylola1 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2010
This poem is so sad that I had to cry!!! :'(

I have the same sitiuation!!!! :cries:

No Joke I had to cry!!!!!!!!!
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Lil-InFeCtEd Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
wow....those are most of the things I feel right now....the basical difference is that I miss the guy I like so much it makes go insane...and I hate that feeling....anyway, this poem is beautiful from my point of view
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TizziGirlKaulitz Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
omg... this is exactly whats going on with me right now... holy F*ckness... thanks so much for like saying everything i feel
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PeaceLoveandCookies Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Do i detect a hint of Green Day influence in that last verse? :meow: wonderful poem. :la:
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this describes my feelings right now.. I just wish they'd all understand why I can never stop loving him.. :(
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michael121799 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2010
i love it i needed that i just cant stop crying
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TohruLuvsKyo Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2010  Student Filmographer
Im crying right now. Exactly what Im going through.
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EveLupin Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
my best friend is going through this, because of her best boy friend and it's really beautiful
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wolfkid96 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
very pretty =D
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem. Describes my life right now.
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lightningboltzlove Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009
It's beautiful :)

reminds me of my ex-fiancee </3
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Angelgirls Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009  Student General Artist
very, very pretty... i really liked!v
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AdeoDeLuna Featured By Owner May 3, 2009
holy shit....that is EXACTLLY how i feel right now
its actually rather sad...but its true
great poem i love it
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AmayaDarkblood Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
I know how that feels...I still feel that way.....
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Steph200410 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009
This is exactly how I felt a couple of days ago.
I love it! Its amazing.
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mindra Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
bullseye :(
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uchihagurl7 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009
great picture and poem...i undersatnd this poem clearly i can relate to it right now...this is just like the words in my mind..really cool..
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soul-rose Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
This is really sad and so good. I kinda feel like that's happened to me, but the guy and I are actually friends now, so it's good. Great job on your poem. And I love the pic ^ ^
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Flower-of-the-Earth Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
this poem actually made me cry more
buts it still really good
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Kataang-furuba Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008
Awww..:aww: I love it. I also like the drawing!
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darkly2000 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2008
wow this is really good ^^
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Argent-Ookami Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008
This is... exactly how I feel atm, and even though he let me down gently... it still hurts so bad and I still want him...
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shadowman03 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2007
WOW NICE I RELLLY LOVE IT..
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lovesfantasystuff Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2007
i feel totaly like this right now
i felt like crying but i couldn't let it out now this poem has helped
i thank you
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thesuicidalhamster Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2007
I feel like this today
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Stiiiiiiiiiina Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2007
That Poem Is Sooo Good! (:
I Love It...
^^
:+favlove:
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nightwolf8 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2007
very touching....iz very good tooo! :)
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freekykjaden Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2007
poor girl :(...good poem though
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sadconfusion Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2007   Writer
i love the picture too...really nice
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sadconfusion Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2007   Writer
i really like it...very deep.....and sad
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raynb44 Featured By Owner May 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
omg, its like im reading bout myself....
thanx for this, really. its nice to see im not the only one (even if its ur friend not u)
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gonnabeastarr Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2007   Writer
i'm sure you did your friends justice here because the poem is simply beautiful (as is the picture but i'm just a writer and can't really critique art)

and i'd love to hear what you think of my stuff too. thanks
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mla110v Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2007
That is a great poem and the fact that I'm going through that right now it's just so true.
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redpheonix06 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2006
its really beautiful... both the poem and the art... amazing work because it comes from inside. Right now i can really connect to it ... great job... i wish i could create somthing that wonderful in that 'moment'
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Hinata098 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2006
Thats beautiful!
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angelgrrrrrrrl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2005
oops, my bad! :floating:
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angelgrrrrrrrl Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
u poor thing! who's it based on? :floating:
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KinkyDevil Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2005
its not about me...its about my mate!
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QuenQuen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2005
Gorgeous, and so sad... this poem seriously relates to my own life. Continue writing poems, espeically ones like this.. you have a devine talent.
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savetheduck Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
"all i want is for you to see
is what you really mean to me" <--- don't have the is at the beginning of the first line... it doesnt need to be there and it throws off the second line.

i like it though... i do the same thing.. write for other people... i'll need to put up more of my poetry soon
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DynamoTom Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005   Digital Artist
wow great poem its very emotional i like it ^_^
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